feat: New Essay (29) #7

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Pull Request Overview

Adds a new essay (ID 29) in both English and Portuguese, includes embedded audio playback, and updates the essays index to publish and surface the post. Also normalizes tag arrays in essays.json to single-line format.

  • New essay content added: English and pt-BR versions with audio sources
  • essays.json updated: new entry for ID 29 (published, slug/title/description), and tags arrays compacted
  • Minor copy issues exist (typos/grammar) and accessibility improvements suggested for audio

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static/pages/essays/29/README.md New English essay content with audio element
static/pages/essays/29/README.pt-BR.md New Portuguese (pt-BR) essay content with audio element
static/pages/essays.json Adds/publishes essay 29 metadata; compacts tags arrays

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## Pull Request Overview Adds a new essay (ID 29) in both English and Portuguese, includes embedded audio playback, and updates the essays index to publish and surface the post. Also normalizes tag arrays in essays.json to single-line format. - New essay content added: English and pt-BR versions with audio sources - essays.json updated: new entry for ID 29 (published, slug/title/description), and tags arrays compacted - Minor copy issues exist (typos/grammar) and accessibility improvements suggested for audio ### Reviewed Changes Copilot reviewed 3 out of 6 changed files in this pull request and generated 9 comments. | File | Description | | ---- | ----------- | | static/pages/essays/29/README.md | New English essay content with audio element | | static/pages/essays/29/README.pt-BR.md | New Portuguese (pt-BR) essay content with audio element | | static/pages/essays.json | Adds/publishes essay 29 metadata; compacts tags arrays | --- <sub>**Tip:** Customize your code reviews with copilot-instructions.md. <a href="/rdenadai/rdenadai.com.br/new/main/.github?filename=copilot-instructions.md" class="Link--inTextBlock" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">Create the file</a> or <a href="https://docs.github.com/en/copilot/customizing-copilot/adding-repository-custom-instructions-for-github-copilot" class="Link--inTextBlock" target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer">learn how to get started</a>.</sub>
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:47 +00:00

Corrija 'nowdays' para 'nowadays' e ajuste a concordância verbal: 'and affect our critical thinking'. Também é mais natural 'Over the decades, education has changed.'

    "description": "Over the decades, education has changed. But nowadays we might face new challenges given the introduction of Large Language Models (LLMs) like ChatGPT, which could influence the way we learn and affect our critical thinking.",
Corrija 'nowdays' para 'nowadays' e ajuste a concordância verbal: 'and affect our critical thinking'. Também é mais natural 'Over the decades, education has changed.' ```suggestion "description": "Over the decades, education has changed. But nowadays we might face new challenges given the introduction of Large Language Models (LLMs) like ChatGPT, which could influence the way we learn and affect our critical thinking.", ```
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<source src="/static/pages/essays/29/notebookllm.ogg" type="audio/ogg">
Your browser does not support the audio element.
</audio>
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:47 +00:00

Para acessibilidade, inclua legendas/transcrição. Considere adicionar um elemento <track kind="captions"> apontando para um arquivo VTT e/ou um link para a transcrição logo abaixo do player.


<p><a href="/static/pages/essays/29/notebookllm-transcript.md">Read transcript</a></p>
Para acessibilidade, inclua legendas/transcrição. Considere adicionar um elemento <track kind=\"captions\"> apontando para um arquivo VTT e/ou um link para a transcrição logo abaixo do player. ```suggestion <p><a href="/static/pages/essays/29/notebookllm-transcript.md">Read transcript</a></p> ```
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The role a student takes on is to learn something, a subject or an activity, and may therefore need a mentor.
Much has been said about replacing teachers with LLMs, and I won't even go into that, as I understand you could replace a teacher with an LLM the same way you replace a teacher with books or other materials for self-guided study (given the immense limitations LLMs carry, like the infamous hallucinations). I haven't seen much discussions about the possibilities or problems for a student wishing to go down this path might have.
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:46 +00:00

Correção gramatical: use 'many discussions' e simplifique a oração final para evitar redundância.

Much has been said about replacing teachers with LLMs, and I won't even go into that, as I understand you could replace a teacher with an LLM the same way you replace a teacher with books or other materials for self-guided study (given the immense limitations LLMs carry, like the infamous hallucinations). I haven't seen many discussions about the possibilities or problems a student might face when choosing this path.
Correção gramatical: use 'many discussions' e simplifique a oração final para evitar redundância. ```suggestion Much has been said about replacing teachers with LLMs, and I won't even go into that, as I understand you could replace a teacher with an LLM the same way you replace a teacher with books or other materials for self-guided study (given the immense limitations LLMs carry, like the infamous hallucinations). I haven't seen many discussions about the possibilities or problems a student might face when choosing this path. ```
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Therefore, students should not use LLMs to study any content, and if they happen to use them to expand their vocabulary or gather information on a topic, they should be careful not to suffer from hallucinations (because they will occur).
Another extremely important point is **don't use LLMs to solve the exercises and problems assigned by the teacher for understanding and reinforcing the subject at hand..** I shouldn't even have to say how crucial it is for students to actually perform the activity, right? A [recent study](https://publichealthpolicyjournal.com/mit-study-finds-artificial-intelligence-use-reprograms-the-brain-leading-to-cognitive-decline/) indicates that using AI to perform tasks humans can already do leads to cognitive decline; imagine not even learning the topic being studied.
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:46 +00:00

Remova o ponto duplicado ao final: use apenas um ponto dentro do negrito.

Another extremely important point is **don't use LLMs to solve the exercises and problems assigned by the teacher for understanding and reinforcing the subject at hand.** I shouldn't even have to say how crucial it is for students to actually perform the activity, right? A [recent study](https://publichealthpolicyjournal.com/mit-study-finds-artificial-intelligence-use-reprograms-the-brain-leading-to-cognitive-decline/) indicates that using AI to perform tasks humans can already do leads to cognitive decline; imagine not even learning the topic being studied.
Remova o ponto duplicado ao final: use apenas um ponto dentro do negrito. ```suggestion Another extremely important point is **don't use LLMs to solve the exercises and problems assigned by the teacher for understanding and reinforcing the subject at hand.** I shouldn't even have to say how crucial it is for students to actually perform the activity, right? A [recent study](https://publichealthpolicyjournal.com/mit-study-finds-artificial-intelligence-use-reprograms-the-brain-leading-to-cognitive-decline/) indicates that using AI to perform tasks humans can already do leads to cognitive decline; imagine not even learning the topic being studied. ```
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### Dependence and Addiction
Perhaps one of the most harmful for students, and if uncontrolled, it will surely lead to a drastic decrease in society's knowledge and cognitive capacity. Here, everyone loses: society loses individuals with less critical thinking; but some gain, such as those who manipulate it to gain power. So, who benefits from people becoming addicted to these and other technologies?
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:47 +00:00

Melhore a fluência: 'one of the most harmful' carece de substantivo; sugiro 'one of the most harmful issues for students'.

Perhaps one of the most harmful issues for students, and if uncontrolled, it will surely lead to a drastic decrease in society's knowledge and cognitive capacity. Here, everyone loses: society loses individuals with less critical thinking; but some gain, such as those who manipulate it to gain power. So, who benefits from people becoming addicted to these and other technologies?
Melhore a fluência: 'one of the most harmful' carece de substantivo; sugiro 'one of the most harmful issues for students'. ```suggestion Perhaps one of the most harmful issues for students, and if uncontrolled, it will surely lead to a drastic decrease in society's knowledge and cognitive capacity. Here, everyone loses: society loses individuals with less critical thinking; but some gain, such as those who manipulate it to gain power. So, who benefits from people becoming addicted to these and other technologies? ```
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<source src="/static/pages/essays/29/notebookllm.ogg" type="audio/ogg">
Your browser does not support the audio element.
</audio>
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:47 +00:00

Para acessibilidade, inclua legendas/transcrição. Adicione um <track kind="captions"> com VTT e/ou um link para uma transcrição em texto.


**Transcrição:**  
_A transcrição deste áudio será disponibilizada em breve. Se você precisa de acesso imediato, por favor entre em contato._
Para acessibilidade, inclua legendas/transcrição. Adicione um <track kind=\"captions\"> com VTT e/ou um link para uma transcrição em texto. ```suggestion **Transcrição:** _A transcrição deste áudio será disponibilizada em breve. Se você precisa de acesso imediato, por favor entre em contato._ ```
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Desculpem todos os docentes que por um acaso caírem nesse post e se identificarem com o segundo caso. Se esse for seu caso, talvez você precise repensar sua orientação e o modo como está inserido no contexto de sua universidade/faculdade.
Vou começar pelo segundo caso, porquê, acredito ser o caso onde os alunos mais reclamam e os professores que são apenas repassadores de informação, e para esses talvez as LLMs sejam a peça que faltava para aumentar a linha de produção e diminuir o trabalho manual aumentando a produtividade.
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:45 +00:00

Use 'porque' (conjunção explicativa) em vez de 'porquê' (substantivo) no contexto da frase.

Vou começar pelo segundo caso, porque, acredito ser o caso onde os alunos mais reclamam e os professores que são apenas repassadores de informação, e para esses talvez as LLMs sejam a peça que faltava para aumentar a linha de produção e diminuir o trabalho manual aumentando a produtividade.
Use 'porque' (conjunção explicativa) em vez de 'porquê' (substantivo) no contexto da frase. ```suggestion Vou começar pelo segundo caso, porque, acredito ser o caso onde os alunos mais reclamam e os professores que são apenas repassadores de informação, e para esses talvez as LLMs sejam a peça que faltava para aumentar a linha de produção e diminuir o trabalho manual aumentando a produtividade. ```
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### Mercado de trabalho
Essa ideia absurda de que "a AI não vai te substituir, mas alguém que sabe usar AI vai pode vir a pressionar estudantes e outras pessoas a fazerem uso das ferramentas sem nenhuma necessidade, ocasionando uma corrida para aprender ou usar algo que nem faz sentido para sua atividade-fim.
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:46 +00:00

Correção gramatical: 'vai pode' é incorreto; use 'pode' ou 'vai poder'.

Essa ideia absurda de que "a AI não vai te substituir, mas alguém que sabe usar AI vai poder vir a pressionar estudantes e outras pessoas a fazerem uso das ferramentas sem nenhuma necessidade, ocasionando uma corrida para aprender ou usar algo que nem faz sentido para sua atividade-fim.
Correção gramatical: 'vai pode' é incorreto; use 'pode' ou 'vai poder'. ```suggestion Essa ideia absurda de que "a AI não vai te substituir, mas alguém que sabe usar AI vai poder vir a pressionar estudantes e outras pessoas a fazerem uso das ferramentas sem nenhuma necessidade, ocasionando uma corrida para aprender ou usar algo que nem faz sentido para sua atividade-fim. ```
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Por fim, deixarei aqui um último trecho de um artigo de pesquisadores da Microsoft sobre o uso excessivo de LLMs:
**_"[...] it can inhibit critical engagement with work and can potentially lead to l ong-term overreliance on the tool and diminished skill for independent problem-solving. Higher confidence in GenAIs ability to perform a task is related to less critical thinking effort. When using GenAI tools, the effort invested in critical thinking shifts from information gathering to information verification; from problem-solving to AI response integration; and from task execution to task stewardship."_** [The Impact of Generative AI on Critical Thinking: Self-Reported Reductions in Cognitive Effort and Confidence Effects From a Survey of Knowledge Workers](https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3706598.3713778)
copilot-pull-request-reviewer[bot] (Migrated from github.com) commented 2025-10-15 11:05:46 +00:00

Há um espaço indevido em 'l ong-term'; corrija para 'long-term'.

**_"[...] it can inhibit critical engagement with work and can potentially lead to long-term overreliance on the tool and diminished skill for independent problem-solving. Higher confidence in GenAI’s ability to perform a task is related to less critical thinking effort. When using GenAI tools, the effort invested in critical thinking shifts from information gathering to information verification; from problem-solving to AI response integration; and from task execution to task stewardship."_** [The Impact of Generative AI on Critical Thinking: Self-Reported Reductions in Cognitive Effort and Confidence Effects From a Survey of Knowledge Workers](https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3706598.3713778)
Há um espaço indevido em 'l ong-term'; corrija para 'long-term'. ```suggestion **_"[...] it can inhibit critical engagement with work and can potentially lead to long-term overreliance on the tool and diminished skill for independent problem-solving. Higher confidence in GenAI’s ability to perform a task is related to less critical thinking effort. When using GenAI tools, the effort invested in critical thinking shifts from information gathering to information verification; from problem-solving to AI response integration; and from task execution to task stewardship."_** [The Impact of Generative AI on Critical Thinking: Self-Reported Reductions in Cognitive Effort and Confidence Effects From a Survey of Knowledge Workers](https://dl.acm.org/doi/10.1145/3706598.3713778) ```
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